Erosion


Read by Lon S. Cohen

(5 stars; 1 reviews)

Canyon Park is bowed down under a relentless torrent of rain. The fields are flooded, the bridges crumble and the increasingly isolated town is host to a serial killer with a grudge against the wealthy Lollo family. Slipping between a small cast of characters; the killer, the tortured policeman hiding a dark secret, the returning son, the inquisitive librarian, the boy caught between cultures.... each of these marred, struggling humans a part of the threadbare fabric of the town. Throughout the story, secrets and motivations are slowly revealed, people continue to die, and it continues to rain. - Emily from POD People

The story is about a Native American, driven to madness by his experience growing up in the small upstate New York town of Canyon Park being discriminated, molested and ostracized. In his mind, various characters of his tribe's mythology and American popular culture vie for his soul. He terrorizes the residents of Canyon Park, murdering those he judges guilty, to punish them for their crimes against him and his ancestors. Strangely, since the killing spree began, there has been a deluge of constant rain adding to the dismal mood and hampering efforts to stop him while the resident also battle nature's fury. Under these conditions, various characters gather from places as close as the local library, to as far away as New York City, to absolve their sins and stop their beloved town from being eroded away.

All the characters are eventually stripped bare in this trying time and face their naked souls, their dark inner parts that they are afraid to see and their true selves. America's national guilt over the destruction of the Native American culture is weaved through the motivation of the characters as they struggle with the consequences of acts they committed in the past or the acts of their kin.

The Indian Boarding Schools and the Mythology of Iroquois Creation Myth were thoroughly researched and are based on fact though the setting and characters are all fictional.

Thanks Tom Cote for his version of Amazing Grace in my last chapter.


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The story line was Ok. I did have problems trying to keep up with which character was talking. My biggest complaint was the length of the podcasts. Some of them were 5, 7 8 minutes long. You say a couple of sentences and then the episode is over. Between the ...


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Some of the lengths varied but only the intro was less than 10 minutes. I did the episodes by chapters and each one has an intro and outro as per the Podiobook guidelines. When you read a book you separate by chapters. Since this is not a "podcast" per se ...


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First off, thanks to Lon for writing this great podiobook. Second, Erosion is a very apt title for this book. The literal and figurative erosion of a small town, the erosion of a family, the erosion of an entire culture, and the erosion of a man's sanity all come together ...


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First I want to say thank you for writing us a great story, and that this is a nice piece of literature ( so I think anyway, haven't gotten to the end yet..chap.15 next..hope it isn't ruined with the standard all over happy endings...I hate that..I like 50/50 or even ...


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Just finished and wanted to say "thank you", for a very enjoyable listen. It was well paced and thought provoking and I would definitely recommend it. Not sure if you want commentary on the story or the tech, so I'll offer a little of both. Might just be me, but ...


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Sorry I haven't been on here for a while but WOW! Thanks for the comments. Much, much appreciated. I am working on something right now that I hope will be a podiobook, but I will have to see. The comments are very much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks ...


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Rian. Thanks for the pick up. That's what happens when you do a podiobook and self publich without a copy editor. Darn it. :) Maybe if the book ever gets picked up by a publishing company I can fix all the little things that are wrong with it. (Anyone?)


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Hi Lon, I noticed on the first page (at lest as shown on amazon) that you had a typo in your text. It should be "lose" not "loose" i believe. "... the farmers were going to LOOSE everything that year."